The change in her voice was nothing more than the first sign of a bad cold. Yet, her mother gave her a look which wrapped her in an atmosphere of uncertainty. When the caterpillar woke up from her unsettling dreams, she found herself on her bed changed to a beautiful butterfly.
Excellent write.
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Thanks, Andrew 🙂
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I like that a lot, Soumya 🙂
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Just a late-night thought. Thanks, Richard 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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Wow!!! 😍 Your work always amaze me. Loved it. ❤
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Thanks, Shreya. Your comments brighten up my day. 🙂
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😍☺
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Beautiful as always dear! You and your creativity! 😀😀
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Thanks, Shambhavi. You are the sweetest. 🙂
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So are you! You’re welcome Soumya. *_*
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Namaste !
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Gujar raha tha in galiyon tumko dekha , socha salam karta chalun.
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Namaste. Good to see you here. 🙂
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😊
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Beautiful and comprehensible. No need to translate! But,
“उसके आवाज का बदलाव एक जुकाम के दस्तक से अधिक कुछ न था. पर फिर भी उसकी माँ ने इस नजर से देखा कि वो अनिश्चितता के माहौल में लिपट गई. जब वो इल्ली (कैटरपिलर) अपने अस्थिर स्वप्नों से बाहर आई, उसने तो खुद को अपनी ही शय्या पर तितली बना देखा.”
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Woot! Finally, my words made some sense. LOL. Jokes apart, thank you for the translation, and for the new word. I had no idea what’s a caterpillar called in Hindi. *facepalm*
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थोड़ी-थोड़ी हिंदी practice करा रहा हूँ. और आपसे english सीख रहा हूँ.और आज तो ईद भी है. इंशा-अल्लाह ‘इल्ली’ से ‘तितली’ दोनों बन ही जाएँगें.
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Amen. 🙂
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Beautiful story
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Thank you, Ritu 🙂
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You are too amazing. And the best part is you write quite frequent
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Thanks, Vishakha. What should I say–it helps me to sharpen my writing skills. 🙂
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It’s really nice
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Thank you 🙂
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